Labtec-Jay
06-10-2006 13:08:33
In 20 words or less, why should we pick you to come to Boot Camp V?
It's a snowboard thing for those intrested. I am looking for something clever and funny.
Thanks for the help in advance..
VampireDude
06-10-2006 13:27:22
Chances are if you need someone to write an interesting 20 word paragraph about yourself, you aren't Boot Camp V material.
Labtec-Jay
06-10-2006 13:30:10
meh.. just trying to think of something clever
but gee. thanks for the help
Tsmith10803
06-10-2006 13:33:06
because if you stay home you'll go so crazy awesome on your snowboard that you'll kill yourself...so they're obviously saving your life
Dave82
06-10-2006 13:59:28
i have some suggestions
1. instead of making it a sentence, just write 20 characteristics about yourself or 20 words describing what you would bring to them (ex desire motivation adrenaline challenge etc)
2. write something in the form of a limeric (sp?)
3. "I'll be all i can be" roll
These are the only "clever" suggestions i got for your boot camp thing.
Labtec-Jay
06-10-2006 14:03:46
meh i made something up myself.. thanks for your help
Dave82
06-10-2006 14:07:52
[quote2f3d350340="Labtec-Jay"]meh i made something up myself.. thanks for your help[/quote2f3d350340]
Haha, i am curious. Post it
KeithA
06-10-2006 14:09:06
[quote3a531b9778="Dave82"]i have some suggestions
1. instead of making it a sentence, just write 20 characteristics about yourself or 20 words describing what you would bring to them (ex desire motivation adrenaline challenge etc)
2. write something in the form of a limeric (sp?)
3. "I'll be all i can be" roll
These are the only "clever" suggestions i got for your boot camp thing.[/quote3a531b9778]
#1 might actually work. A good friend of mine had amazing success with hsi personal statement for college admission. It was just a long string of statements about himself. It went something like this
[quote3a531b9778]I was born in Florida, but I only lived there for 6 months. I play varsity tennis. I have a brain tumor, but it's okay. I'm a National Merit Finalist. My mom dated one of the Kennedys for a few months in college. I had the hiccups for two years (non-stop) as a result of the brain tumor. I'm a professional ski instructor in the winter and a swim coach when it's warm. My dog really is my best friend. [/quote3a531b9778]
Dave82
06-10-2006 14:22:32
[quote55c36baf2f="KeithA"][quote55c36baf2f="Dave82"]i have some suggestions
1. instead of making it a sentence, just write 20 characteristics about yourself or 20 words describing what you would bring to them (ex desire motivation adrenaline challenge etc)
2. write something in the form of a limeric (sp?)
3. "I'll be all i can be" roll
These are the only "clever" suggestions i got for your boot camp thing.[/quote55c36baf2f]
#1 might actually work. A good friend of mine had amazing success with hsi personal statement for college admission. It was just a long string of statements about himself. It went something like this
[quote55c36baf2f]I was born in Florida, but I only lived there for 6 months. I play varsity tennis. I have a brain tumor, but it's okay. I'm a National Merit Finalist. My mom dated one of the Kennedys for a few months in college. I had the hiccups for two years (non-stop) as a result of the brain tumor. I'm a professional ski instructor in the winter and a swim coach when it's warm. My dog really is my best friend. [/quote55c36baf2f][/quote55c36baf2f]
My mom dated one of the Kennedys for a few months in college??? Why did he put that? I thought everything else was great. That is actually creative. I would not have chanced it putting it on a college admission essay. But Nation Merit Finalist and all looks really good.
I am curious about the standards for that. My gf had SEVEN national meriti finalists in her class.
KeithA
06-10-2006 14:32:36
[quote09619faa02="Dave82"]
My mom dated one of the Kennedys for a few months in college??? Why did he put that? I thought everything else was great. That is actually creative. I would not have chanced it putting it on a college admission essay. But Nation Merit Finalist and all looks really good.
I am curious about the standards for that. My gf had SEVEN national meriti finalists in her class.[/quote09619faa02]
Why did he mention that his mom dated a Kennedy? Of all the essays the admissions counselors read, which one do you think they remembered?
I was a National Merit Finalist as well. There were 5 of us out of a class of 200.
I don't recall what the standards are, but I'd say that they're probably not as high as people's perception of the honor might lead them to think.
zdub08
06-10-2006 14:50:06
[quote3776fc3219="KeithA"][quote3776fc3219="Dave82"]
My mom dated one of the Kennedys for a few months in college??? Why did he put that? I thought everything else was great. That is actually creative. I would not have chanced it putting it on a college admission essay. But Nation Merit Finalist and all looks really good.
I am curious about the standards for that. My gf had SEVEN national meriti finalists in her class.[/quote3776fc3219]
Why did he mention that his mom dated a Kennedy? Of all the essays the admissions counselors read, which one do you think they remembered?
I was a National Merit Finalist as well. There were 5 of us out of a class of 200.
I don't recall what the standards are, but I'd say that they're probably not as high as people's perception of the honor might lead them to think.[/quote3776fc3219]
dont you have to get 98th or 99th percentile on the psat? 95th and up is honorable mention letter?