So i listed some of my clothes on ebay, but no hits

http//cgi.ebay.com/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=8395275559&category=57991&ssPageName=STOREPROMOBOXNEWLIST



Can someone help me out, mean the description has no colons, periods etc.

No hits at all. ?

The pictures need to be better. Hang the shirts up and take the pictures. They look all wrinkled and non-professional.

small or medium, good lord kid you're a danty one aren't ya

No im like 5'6 5'7 and their loose on me.

Has to be something with descripition , pics are decent.

you wouldve sold them separately shrug

Hmm maybe 4 shipping on each..Start bids out at .99 cents.

[quote8717553e40="andreliveson"]No im like 5'6 5'7 and their loose on me.

Has to be something with descripition , pics are decent.[/quote8717553e40]

Actually the pics are shit. They just look like peices of cloth with sleeves. They're all bunched together, the lighting is bad, the angles aren't head on.

Do what the above poster said, hang them up so they looks brand new, open the windows and doors and let some natural light in, the take pictures head on and try not to move the camera when you take it.

When it comes to clothes, people will pay attention to what they look like, first and foremost, then they'll read the description. If they like what they see, then they'll be more interested to look at the description and maybe buy.

Trust me, I'm a trained, qualified and over-paid psychologist.

ummm 5'6" is pretty small dude i like the shirts but i would need atleast a large nothing smaller

who would buy a shirt with juice stains on it? ?

You might correct the spelling of "collared." Seems like a likely search term, and you've spelled it "collard" throughout the listing.

Also, those aren't designer clothes...

Hahahaha.. well, if someone's looking to buy collared greens on eBay..

[quote1e9b9851d0="CollidgeGraduit"]Hahahaha.. well, if someone's looking to buy collared greens on eBay..[/quote1e9b9851d0]

LMFAO

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I took the liberty of making sense of your auction. My first suggestion is to not even TRY to sell a shirt with stains... in other words, remove it from the lot.

Also, punctuation and proper sentence structure is your friend. Check out my edits below. I tend to gloss over any auctions that are written poorly. Poor grammar and speech tends to make the person look unintelligent.

YOU ARE BIDDING ON A SET OF 13 MEN 'S SHIRTS. MOST OF THEM ARE DRESS AND CASUAL (PREPPY). ALL IN RARELY USED CONDITION (NO STAINS, CUTS, TEARS, ETC. ON ANY OF THE CLOTHING). CLOTHES WERE BOUGHT FOR AROUND 20-35 DOLLARS A PIECE. SIZES ARE MOSTLY MENS SMALL AND MEDIUM.


ALL SHIRTS ARE VERY NICE (DRESSY AND FLASHY).SHIPPING WILL BE A FLAT 10 DOLLARS TO AMERICAN BUYERS. 35 TO INTERNATIONAL BUYERS

Good luck. )

[quote9e0d5c0506="jadem"]I took the liberty of making sense of your auction. My first suggestion is to not even TRY to sell a shirt with stains... in other words, remove it from the lot.

Also, punctuation and proper sentence structure is your friend. Check out my edits below. I tend to gloss over any auctions that are written poorly. Poor grammar and speech tends to make the person look unintelligent.

YOU ARE BIDDING ON A SET OF 13 MEN 'S SHIRTS. MOST OF THEM ARE DRESS AND CASUAL (PREPPY). ALL IN RARELY USED CONDITION (NO STAINS, CUTS, TEARS, ETC. ON ANY OF THE CLOTHING). CLOTHES WERE BOUGHT FOR AROUND 20-35 DOLLARS A PIECE. SIZES ARE MOSTLY MENS SMALL AND MEDIUM.


ALL SHIRTS ARE VERY NICE (DRESSY AND FLASHY).SHIPPING WILL BE A FLAT 10 DOLLARS TO AMERICAN BUYERS. 35 TO INTERNATIONAL BUYERS

Good luck. )[/quote9e0d5c0506]

I agree, but I'd take it a small step farther.

YOU ARE BIDDING ON A SET OF 13 MEN 'S SHIRTS. MOST OF THEM ARE DRESS AND CASUAL (PREPPY). ALL IN RARELY USED CONDITION (NO STAINS, CUTS, TEARS, ETC. ON ANY OF THE CLOTHING). [b9e0d5c0506]These pieces[/b9e0d5c0506] WERE BOUGHT FOR AROUND [b9e0d5c0506]$30 each[/b9e0d5c0506]. [b9e0d5c0506]The[/b9e0d5c0506]SIZES ARE MOSTLY MENS SMALL AND MEDIUM.
ALL SHIRTS ARE VERY NICE (DRESSY AND FLASHY).

SHIPPING WILL BE A FLAT [b9e0d5c0506]fee of $10 for the continental US. Anywhere outside of the continental US will be a flat $35 shipping fee.[/b9e0d5c0506]

Take new pics.

Sell them individual, with combined shipping charges if more then 1 is bought.

Start auctions at .99 cents.

Fix grammar.

You still have 5 days left. Chill out.

People always panic when they don't get a bid in the first hour. There are millions of articles of clothing on ebay. Right now people are bidding on shit that's ending soon.

Add a free thong to the bid winner.

i just noticed eBay changed the description page..

I don't like it